The Enemy - Page 10

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It was a little rushed, but I needed it to to be read right after the previous pages (if you are to make any sense of it) and I'm pretty sure no one ever goes back to the the previous pages. So, I quickly got it done. And I finally got to a more light hearted part. ^__^

So yeah, I doubt anyone else is seeing this, but this page is "the first kiss". Yeah, it seems a little shoujo-ai-ish. xD But it's meant to be symbolic. >_> It helps tell the story because this is meant to be like the turning point and... ah forget it.

Also, I switched their roles around. Here, the assassin's the kid, and Ayumi is the mature one. But ironically, Ayumi is looking adorable eating her ice-cream. xD

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Stuff I've said in the previous pages:
This is actually a back story for one of my characters so it might be a little confusing. Basically, the story focuses around Ayumi who has purple hair. She was originally a side character but I've decided to centre the story around hers to make the manga a lot shorter. Her story started off as just 4 pages but I've decided to elaborate on it a bit to share it with everyone who's reading it now.

Technique:
Actual comic done on paper with screentones digitally inserted. The "dots" were the only screentones I used. blood effects, zoom lines and whatnot were done manually, freehand or with a ruler.